Teh Wozzinator

Wow. Still awesome. I agree that the end wasn't perfect, you kind of lost the drama, but I'm still reading more, definitely. Anyways, no edits... Keep writing! Teh Wozzinator

Yelling? I am not yelling and I am not purposely out to insult the work of other people. i'm simple offering an opinion and "critiquing" work. And if you are ...

You do but it blows up your brain. No one picks on you anymore because you're buried... I wish that I could come up with a good idea for a ...

bigbadbear said: Star!!! you are not ugly!!! You are so pretty!!! omg! You're amazing! I is amazing??? yoha-ahoy said: star - your'e gorgeous! love the hair. ^_^ *blink blink* author13 ...

It seems the only reason that people post these pictures of themselves is to add the comment that they're so ugly, are't they? and wait for everyone else to fall ...

So pretty, star! And yoha, that's an awesome first pic there. Well, since I'm here... *ahem* And my hair isn't green, it's just a bad webcam :lol: . Oh and ...

What was a joke?

Actually "Cherryfield" is a name I came up with. By the way, ccm... remember me?? 'Tis Gud, from NaNo!! Lol... Anyways, thanks for the crit!

I guess that I missed the name change because I was skiing. I want to be Teh Wozzinator...

Ahhhh!!! That's it?? I need more! You've got me hooked now. Sorry I don't have much more critique than that. I was to involved in the plot and her feelings ...

That was... really awesome. It seemed a little bit weird the way you wrote it, and some of your rhymes seemed a tiny bit forced, but there didn't really seem ...

RIGHT- 1) You need to decide whether you want to write poetry or prose. Believe it or not there is a difference. Writing a story in verse is pointless- especially ...

One Good that came from Crime There’s a lady from the supermarket Sits at the counter by aisle ten. She puts a twenty In the cash drawer And deals out ...

I have to say that I liked this. Your rhythm wasn't bad, and I liked the way that it was written. The only line that I thought didn't flow at ...

I liked this, but there were a few grammar mistakes that I don't have time to point out right now. You might find them yourself. I really like this story ...